I liked your photo story. I learned you are from a mining family. I also you to sit and listen to the stories my great grandma would tell from when she was a little girl. Some of the best stories I've ever heard came from her. I liked the overall product of your photo story and I don't think there is anything I would change.
I learned you are from a mining family just like me! You also have a love for animals. I really enjoyed watching your photo story. I liked the fact that you dedicated your story to your grandparents. I wouldn't change anything about your photo story it was splendid!
From your photo story I learned that you are from a mining and farming family. I loved your story and the fact that you dedicated it to your grandparents, because I know what it's like to lose them! I wouldn't change anything about you photo story!
I really enjoyed the photo story. I learned that you are very in touch with nature. I like the few family photos you included and would liked to have seen more personal photos.
You did an outstanding job with transitions and using different font styles to set different tones with words and images! I like that your music set a reverent tone! This was excellent!
I liked your photo story. I learned you are from a mining family. I also you to sit and listen to the stories my great grandma would tell from when she was a little girl. Some of the best stories I've ever heard came from her. I liked the overall product of your photo story and I don't think there is anything I would change.
ReplyDeleteI learned you are from a mining family just like me! You also have a love for animals. I really enjoyed watching your photo story. I liked the fact that you dedicated your story to your grandparents. I wouldn't change anything about your photo story it was splendid!
ReplyDeleteFrom your photo story I learned that you are from a mining and farming family. I loved your story and the fact that you dedicated it to your grandparents, because I know what it's like to lose them! I wouldn't change anything about you photo story!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the photo story. I learned that you are very in touch with nature. I like the few family photos you included and would liked to have seen more personal photos.
ReplyDeleteYou did an outstanding job with transitions and using different font styles to set different tones with words and images! I like that your music set a reverent tone! This was excellent!
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